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angelofpity

Age/Gender: 18, Female
Location: the celestial feilds
Job: cant tell you.

...*hides* i uhhh...i like animals and im scared of ppl i like vampires angels and werewolves...im good at drawing and poetry and story writeing...and i love to help ppl if and when i can too.

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angelofpity

i'll title it later

Posted by angelofpity May. 18, 2008 @ 12:28 AM EDT

you walk in to this darkend mansion demons everwhere you look you cryout and noone hears you except as you look around the house creatures moveing in the shadows shifting and knocking things over. as you walk up stairs and turn to your right into a winding hall way you see three doors on your left and on the right three more doors and one straight down the hallway.you open one of the doors and see a library a desk with a labtop wall to wall lined with books you pick one up and see the pages were blank!
: : you casted it on the floor in fear and run for the door just to find the creatures had locked it! thats when it hit you "what the helI what is this place.damn parents did they have to kick me out of my house! " then you started to think "oh yeah cause they ******** hate me!" you then started to think of what is going to happen now.just as you were pondering this your cell phone goes off you answer and you hear a voice on the other end a female voice! " my name is ezra plz help me i am some where in the house and need your help." frightened yet concerned you replied"what why is this my ... how the hell did you get this number!"as you yelled she interupts" ezra is my name i would love to ...i have to go the place you are in is ..."the line cuts off.you then try to call home ....it rings and it picks up and you hear a voice but its not you parents but a voice that you were familur with anyway it was your own voice freaked out yet comforted in some odd way you listened"hey man wassup! u need some help"in a sarcastic attitude you answer " no im fine im just sipping some tea with a demon!"the voice on the phone then repliyed" dont get smart with me im you darker half asshole i know you inside and out! later call me when your done doing my job." well you pissed off and frusterated and scared pick up the blank book.......
so many questions so little time

who is that lady that called you? and why is your darker half trying to help you? and most of all where the heck are you?

oh yeah this story is out there for enyone to make a game out of also if your going to use this as a flash portal plz look me up and plz ask me first cause i hate ppl that steal my stuff without permission-_-" oh yeah chek out all my posts aswell every one in a while i update them
chow=3oh yea h im gonna have to edit it my mom...~_~" dosent like it. you know ppl in the face of fear change right well because of my realism my mom might ground me....*sigh*

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5 Comments

May. 18, 2008 | 12:32 AM igott says:

wow. i writ my own stuff.

May. 18, 2008 | 10:27 AM angelofpity responds:

cool i like to write to.=3


May. 18, 2008 | 12:39 AM angelofpity says:

and yes this is your character. he name is
zilo but z for short. his darker half he has had for years but never once has he left a message for himself or called to himself lol.his darker half is named asteral.


May. 19, 2008 | 9:06 PM G-man300 says:

Wow this would make a great storyline for a flash or a game. Great work too!!

May. 19, 2008 | 10:06 PM angelofpity responds:

thanks =3


May. 20, 2008 | 10:57 PM chadgarza says:

That writing crept me out a little bit but I like the story its cool.

May. 21, 2008 | 7:45 AM angelofpity responds:

thanx =3


May. 22, 2008 | 5:37 PM Keli1989 says:

Im going to leave a bunny rabbit...
:3

May. 22, 2008 | 11:23 PM angelofpity responds:

yay!

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