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lingering (ruf draft i'll update it later)

Posted by angelofpity Jun. 24, 2008 @ 2:19 PM EDT

im willing to listen when you need me
im here if you want me

im here to listen to help... or heal the scars of your past.
i might not be able to love the way you want me to ....but i love the way god wanted me to.
you see i linger here in the darkness of my past to help others find the light.
i linger and wonder in the dark crying to myself , cuting and waiting with the broken shards of my heart for i want you to listen wanting you to see the damage that others have done and yet i still choose to stay in this cold hell for peaple that i don't know staying for the one that still need or want to find peace.
you see i linger here to save others that still need me.

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Jun. 24, 2008 | 2:21 PM NewMoopsie says:

YOU SUCK

Jun. 24, 2008 | 2:23 PM angelofpity responds:

your only angered for the fact that you too are a lost one and you have a void that cant be sealed and the way you try to seal it is materials or girls or even hatred
and i can tell you right now it will not work you will always feel a void.

Jun. 24, 2008 | 2:25 PM angelofpity says:

by the way i hope you guys like it i have to go to class.

Jun. 24, 2008 | 2:48 PM chadgarza says:

That poam touched me a little bit.

Jun. 30, 2008 | 11:18 AM angelofpity responds:

you and all ppl were the reason i wrote it i love to care and love others they way i was never loved.i mean doing enything just to be noticed doing enything to have firends *sigh* well thats life for you a nightmare that is ment to be nothing but temporary right .=*3

Jun. 25, 2008 | 3:35 PM G-man300 says:

This is a very touching poem just like Chad said. And don't listen to NewMoopsie this guy is just a jerk. And what you said about him is true. Glad to see another great poem that you made. This is very good for a rough draft. Well I hope you have a great day! :)

Jun. 30, 2008 | 11:19 AM angelofpity responds:

thanks g- man =3 i'll i wish i could right these with out ppl stealing them.

Jul. 1, 2008 | 8:54 AM chadgarza says:

You wrote that because of me?

Jul. 10, 2008 | 11:36 AM angelofpity responds:

yes... i did

Jul. 1, 2008 | 9:12 AM chadgarza says:

DID YOU SEE IT MY ULTIMET PICTURE, YOU MUST SEE IT RIGHT....NOW!!!!

Jul. 10, 2008 | 11:39 AM angelofpity responds:

no i haven't

Jul. 7, 2008 | 9:13 PM MegamanZero360 says:

I'm in love...?

Jul. 10, 2008 | 11:40 AM angelofpity responds:

...you like me? why.? if so pm me. and we can sort this out ... your not a perve are you*hides behind chad* cause hes my virtual big brother!lol

Updated: Jul. 10, 2008, 12:16 PM

Jul. 7, 2008 | 10:28 PM chadgarza says:

Uhhhhh angelofpity I think someone likes you. O.O

Jul. 10, 2008 | 11:38 AM angelofpity responds:

really -_-"who lol.

Jul. 8, 2008 | 8:39 AM G-man300 says:

Aww.. isn't that cute?

Jul. 10, 2008 | 11:37 AM angelofpity responds:

thank you =3

Jul. 10, 2008 | 9:21 PM chadgarza says:

????? Hides behind chad? O.O

Jul. 10, 2008 | 9:25 PM chadgarza says:

Don't you see MegamanZero360 likes you well I don't know haha! O.o"